Wednesday, June 6, 2012

I went back and changed a couple of things, so here's the edited prologue. All comments are welcome. :)



Prologue

      It all started with Him. Our world was a happy place. We all lived in peace with each other. There was no more fighting, but He didn't like it that way. He thought our world was in every way imperfect. You see, He was greedy. He wanted to rule over our world. He wanted to shape our world into His image. At first He was the only one who thought this way, but He had a way with words. He began going from city to city persuading young and old to join Him, to take over. As time went by He began to convince more and more people. Soon, He had an army. With this army He took control. He made kings bow to Him. He made countries fall to their knees. He provided His army with the most advanced weapons.

      Then He began sending His army to kill innocent people. People began to see that He was wrong. That His way was not the only way. They realized that you didn't have to kill to have power. So they rebelled, but He saw it coming. He knew one day this would happen, so He was ready. As soon as the rebellion started He sent out His army and they wiped out everyone. He heard their screams as they were murdered and He listened joyfully. He did not care who had to die, as long as He always had power. But that’s why I am telling you this story. He must not continue to rule.


                     We must rebel again.

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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